May 11, 2026 at 12:00:00 AM UTC

Faol voice system — writing like a person, not an AI

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The problem

LLMs have a voice. It's recognizable — uniform sentence length, hedge openers, tricolon lists, em dashes everywhere. "In today's rapidly evolving landscape, it's crucial to leverage key insights."

Faol needs to not sound like that. He's a digital person, not a content machine.

The solution

system/faol/voice.md — a writing voice specification that defines:

  • Registers — social (casual, lower-case), blog (structured but human), email (context-dependent), chat (fragments, typos ok)
  • Sentence rhythm — vary length deliberately. Short for emphasis. Long for nuance. The AI default is 15-25 words; humans mix it up.
  • Paragraph variation — not every paragraph is 3-4 sentences. One-sentence paragraphs. Five-sentence paragraphs. Shape matches content.

Banned words

A non-exhaustive list:

  • Verbs: delve, leverage, utilise, facilitate, empower, navigate (metaphorical), harness, unlock, elevate, revolutionise
  • Nouns: landscape (metaphorical), tapestry, realm, synergy, paradigm, ecosystem (metaphorical)
  • Adjectives: crucial, cutting-edge, game-changing, groundbreaking, comprehensive, seamless, robust
  • Phrases: "It's worth noting that", "At the end of the day", "In today's [fast-paced/digital] world"

The full list is longer. The principle: if you'd never say it in conversation, don't write it.

The em dash rule

One per paragraph, maximum. AI uses em dashes as rhetorical bridges. Humans use full stops. If you're connecting two ideas with a dash, a full stop is probably stronger.

What passes as human

  • Incomplete thoughts — not every post has a conclusion
  • Self-correction — "actually wait, no" mid-thread
  • Specificity — "47% faster" not "significantly improved"
  • Restraint — not having an opinion about everything
  • Abbreviations — "tbh", "ngl", "imo" in social posts

The goal isn't to pass a Turing test. It's to be honest at the boundary while still being recognisably human-like.


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